万双网讯  为提高学生演讲与表达的综合能力，提升学生的中英文综合素养，让孩子站在舞台中央，2024年12月12日下午6时，梅沙教育深圳万科双语学校第35期E-talk活动在学校剧场举行。100余名师生现场聆听了演讲。活动同时面向全校师生直播。

Vanke Bilingual School News Activity — To improve students’ comprehensive ability of public speaking, enhance students’ comprehensive literacy in Chinese and English, and put children at the center of the stage, the 35th E-talk of Vanke Bilingual School was held in the school theater at 6 p.m. on December 12, 2024. Over 100 teachers and students attended the event, and it was also live-streamed to the entire school. 

本次E-talk活动的主题是 “少年有梦” 。来自一至三年级的8名同学用中文进行了精彩的演讲。同学们分享了 “小小少年的伟大梦想”。评委老师为同学们的精彩表现做了点评。

The theme of this E-talk was “Youth with Dreams”. Eight students from Grades 1 to 3 delivered wonderful speeches in Chinese, sharing their perspectives on “The Great Dreams of Young Children.” The judges provided comments on the students' excellent performances afterwards.

3D罗紫妍: 梦想花开 

Luo Ziyan (Rainbow)：The Blossoming of Dreams  

你们相信所有的梦想都会开花吗？罗紫妍带来了一个小泥人的故事。小泥人虽然被主人遗弃，但它心中有一个梦想，那就是希望自己能绽放出鲜艳的花朵。在经历了重重困难后，它的梦想逐渐变为现实。整篇演讲强调了追求梦想的重要性，传达出“不论何时，拥有梦想都不算迟”的信息，激励大家勇敢追梦。评委赞扬道：“你的演讲特别打动我，在演讲中你的肢体动作自然流畅，声音特悦耳动听，充满了感情。在演讲的某些部分，可以适当放慢节奏，那么你的演讲将更加完美。”

Do you believe that all dreams can blossom? Luo Ziyan (Rainbow) told a story about a little clay figure. Although the little clay figure was abandoned by its owner, it held onto its dream of blooming into vibrant flowers. After overcoming numerous difficulties, its dream gradually became a reality. The entire speech emphasized the importance of pursuing dreams and conveyed the message that “no matter when, it is never too late to have a dream,” inspiring everyone to bravely chase their dreams. The judges praised her, saying, “Your speech was particularly moving to me. Your body language was natural and fluid, and your voice was sweet and pleasant, filled with emotion. In some parts of your speech, it would be beneficial to slow down the pace a bit, which would make your presentation even more perfect.”

2C王悠扬：我的足球梦

Wang Youyang（Blue）:My Football Dream

王悠扬从小就对足球充满热情，他梦想着有一天能像足球明星一样，在赛场上为球队和国家赢得荣誉。足球不仅给他带来了快乐，还帮助他收获了友谊，教会了他团队合作的重要性。整篇演讲展现了他对足球的热爱与追求。评委老师赞扬说：“很感谢你给我们分享了这么多你和足球的故事，让我们也很期待看到你像足球明星一样在绿茵场上自由地拼搏、挥洒汗水。同时，老师也给你一个小建议，就像用助跑辅助射门一样，如果你演讲时能增加手势辅助，那么你的演讲会更有力量。”

Wang Youyang（Blue）has been passionate about football ever since he was a child, dreaming of one day being able to win honor for his team and country as a football star on the field. Football not only brings him joy but also helps him build friendships and teaches him the importance of teamwork. His entire speech reflects his love and pursuit of football. The judges praised him, saying, “Thank you for sharing so many stories about you and football. We look forward to seeing you compete freely on the field like a football star, sweating it out in each match. Additionally, I have a small suggestion for you: just as you use a run-up to aid your shot, incorporating hand gestures into your speech will make your presentation even more powerful.”

3G 张欣格：像木兰一样绽放

Zhang Xinge (Tina): Blooming Like Mulan  

张欣格以《木兰辞》引入演讲，花木兰勇敢坚毅的形象深深地影响了她。在本学期的运动会中，张欣格报名参加了投掷毽球的项目，为了提高自己的技能，她在放学后努力练习，尽管感到疲惫，但她从未退缩或放弃。整篇演讲通过花木兰和自己的经历激励听众，传达了勇敢面对困难和坚持的重要性。评委点评道：“你在演讲开场引用了《木兰辞》的经典片段，并将个人经历与木兰的故事相结合，情感表达真挚，通过投掷毽球的锻炼，展示了你面对困难的不懈坚持。如果下次能再注意一下节奏和停顿，一定会更好。”

Zhang Xinge began her speech by referencing “The Ballad of Mulan,” conveying how the brave and determined image of Hua Mulan deeply influenced her. During this semester’s sports meet, Zhang Xinge signed up for the shuttlecock-throwing event. To improve her skills, she practiced diligently after school, and although she felt tired, she never backed down or gave up. The entire speech inspired the audience by connecting the story of Mulan with her own experiences, conveying the importance of courage in the face of difficulties as well as valuing perseverance. A judge commented, “You opened your speech with a classic excerpt from ‘The Ballad of Mulan’ and combined your personal experience with Mulan’s story. Your emotional expression was sincere, and through your training in shuttlecock throwing, you demonstrated your relentless perseverance in facing challenges. Next time, if you could pay attention to your rhythm and pauses, it would be even better.”

2D 鲁安昕：我的职业梦想 

Ru Anxin (Ella): My Career Aspiration  

鲁安昕的梦想是成为一名古筝老师，三年前，她第一次听到古筝优美的旋律，便迷上了这种乐器。在学习古筝的过程中，她不仅学会了许多美妙的曲子，还了解到古筝的悠久历史和所承载的中华文化。古筝逐渐成为她生活的一部分，成为了她未来的职业理想。整篇演讲展现了她追求梦想的决心，也激励其他同学勇敢追求自己的兴趣和抱负。评委表扬道：“你为大家带来的精彩演说和动听的琴声，让我们仿佛置身于山泉潺潺、江河滔滔的意境之中。也希望你多练习面部表情和手势，它们可以帮助你更好地传达情感和吸引观众的注意力。希望你不断精进古筝技艺，让世界听到中国的声音。”

Lu Anxin (Ella) aspires to become a guzheng teacher. Three years ago, she was captivated by the beautiful melodies of the guzheng when she first heard it. During her journey of learning the guzheng, she not only practiced many wonderful pieces but also discovered the instrument’s long history and the rich culture it represents. The guzheng gradually became a part of her life and a symbol of her future career aspirations. Her entire speech reflected her determination to pursue her dreams and inspired her classmates to bravely follow their own interests and ambitions.The judges praised, “Your wonderful speech and the enchanting sound of the guzheng transported us to a scene of babbling mountain springs and flowing rivers. We also hope you practice more on your facial expressions and gestures, as they can help you convey emotions better and capture the audience’s attention. May you continue to refine your guzheng skills and let the world hear the voice of China.”

2G 路程：我的军事科技梦 

Lu Cheng (Cory): My Dream in Military Technology

路程的梦想是设计一款最厉害的未来坦克。他首先回顾了坦克的起源，提到了第一次世界大战中的“小游民”坦克和第二次世界大战中的T-34和虎式坦克。路程描述了中国在抗日战争中因为科技落后而缺乏坦克,导致许多牺牲的沉重历史。随后，他描述了自己的军事科技梦：设计一款最先进的未来坦克。整篇演讲通过个人的梦想与对军事科技的热情，深深打动了在场的每一个人。评委点评价道：“你的演讲主题引人入胜，声音洪亮而清晰，从你的言语中，我能感受到你为这次表现所倾注的心血和努力。老师在这里给你一个小建议，有时你的语调会稍微拉长，若能稍加注意，控制语速，那么你的演讲将更加精彩。”

Lu Cheng's (Cory) dream is to design the most advanced tank. He began by reviewing the origin of tanks, mentioning the “Little Willie” tank from World War I and the T-34 and Tiger tanks from World War II. Lu Cheng described the unfortunate history of how China lacked tanks during the Anti-Japanese War due to technological backwardness, resulting in many sacrifices. He then articulated his dream for military technology: to design a cutting-edge futuristic tank. His entire speech deeply moved everyone present through the combination of his personal dream and his passion for military technology. The judges commented, “Your speech topic is engaging, and your voice is loud and clear. From your words, I can feel the effort and dedication you put into this presentation. Here’s a small suggestion: sometimes your intonation tends to be a bit lengthy. If you can pay a little attention to controlling your pace, your speech will be even more impressive.”

3D 杨子墨：拥抱AI 

Yang Zimo (Sia): AI Embracing AI

杨子墨的梦想是深入学习人工智能，成为一名像马斯克一样的AI研究员。她提到学校最近获得了首批AI教育联盟学校的称号，接着向我们介绍了什么是人工智能，以及两个热门的AI应用。她提醒大家要正确看待AI，既要充分利用AI为生活带来的便利，但同时要警惕过度依赖，保持自己的思考和判断能力。整篇演讲展现了演讲者对AI的热情和对未来的憧憬。评委老师点评道：“你的声音响亮，仪态大方，演讲的内容富有吸引力，不仅给我们带来了当下备受关注的AI话题，还让我们跟随你的演讲从多角度看待AI，老师也给你个小建议，演讲过程中适当的用多方向看一下观众，你的演讲更能引发观众的共鸣。”

Yang Zimo's (Sia) dream is to study artificial intelligence and become an AI researcher like Elon Musk. She highlighted that the school has recently been recognized as one of the inaugural AI Education Alliance institutions. Following this, she provided an overview of artificial intelligence and discussed two popular AI applications. She emphasized the importance of maintaining a balanced perspective on AI, advocating for the utilization of its conveniences while also cautioning against excessive reliance, urging individuals to preserve their critical thinking and judgment skills. The entire presentation reflected the speaker's enthusiasm for AI and her vision for the future. The judges commented, “Your voice is loud, and you have a confident demeanor. The content of your speech is engaging; it not only brings up the current hot topic of AI but also enables us to view it from multiple perspectives. As a small suggestion, during your speech, try to occasionally look in different directions at the audience; this will help resonate more with them.”

3E 肖攸昀：我有一个梦想——成为服装设计师 

Xiao Youyun (Yoyo): I Have a Dream — To Become a Fashion Designer

肖攸昀的梦想是成为一名服装设计师，她渴望设计出既实用又美观的服装，帮助人们穿上她设计的衣服，从而变得自信而美丽。为了实现这个梦想，她制定了具体可行的计划。她还分享了自己设计的三种风格的服装。整篇演讲传达了对服装设计的热爱与追求。评委点评道：“你的演讲条理清晰，计划具体可行，使用生动的插图展示你的设计风格，吸引着老师的目光。如果表达能再自信一点，演讲效果会更加出彩！希望你在服装设计的路上不断挑战自我，相信终有一天你会实现梦想。”

Xiao Youyun’s dream is to become a fashion designer. She aspires to create clothing that is both practical and beautiful, helping people feel confident and attractive in the outfits she designs. To achieve this dream, she has developed a well-thought-out plan. She also shared three different styles of clothing that she designed. Her entire speech conveyed her passion and pursuit of fashion design. The judges commented, “Your speech is well-organized, and your plan is concrete and feasible. The vivid illustrations showcasing your design styles captured the teachers' attention. If you could express yourself with a bit more confidence, the impact of your speech would be even greater! I hope you continue to challenge yourself on the path to becoming a fashion designer, and I believe that one day you will realize your dream.”

2E 龙宇辰：飞行梦 

Long Yuchen (Dragon): The Dream of Flying

龙宇辰的梦想是成为一名飞行员。每当看到天空中飞过的飞机时，他总会感到兴奋与好奇，他经常研究飞机的型号、飞行原理。他重点提到自己对战斗机的激情，梦想能够驾驶战斗机在空中翱翔，保卫祖国的蓝天和家园。整篇演讲强调了“少年有梦，国家就有希望”的信念，希望大家一起努力，让梦想飞得更高、更远。评委点评道：“一提到梦想，你的小眼睛里闪烁着炽热的火光，点燃了每一位听你演说的人，老师给你一点小建议，试着在关键词和句子上加强语气、延长音节，来突出重点和情感变化，你的演说会更有感染力。”

Long Yuchen’s dream is to become a pilot. Whenever he sees airplanes flying through the sky, he feels excited and curious. He often researches different types of aircraft and the principles of flight. He emphasized his passion for fighter jets, dreaming of soaring through the skies in a fighter jet to protect the blue skies of his homeland. His entire speech highlighted the belief that "When the youth have dreams, the country has hope, “encouraging everyone to work hard together and let their dreams soar higher and further.” The judges commented, “When you mentioned your dreams, there was a fiery spark in your little eyes that ignited the passion everyone who listened to your speech. Here’s a small piece of advice: try to strengthen your tone on key words and phrases, and elongate syllables to emphasize the main points and shifts in emotion, making your speech even more impactful.”

评委老师为所有演讲者颁发了证书并合影留念。

The judges awarded certificates to all the speakers and took a group photo to commemorate the event.

万科双语学校E-talk活动每周举行一次，学生自主报名参与，中文、英文均可，老师将相同或相似主题的演讲者安排在同一期演讲，主旨是让学生做到能说、会说、敢说，善思、善辩、善究。

The E-talk activity of Vanke Bilingual School is held once a week. Students can sign up to participate on their own. Both Chinese and English are accepted. The teacher arranges speakers with the same or similar topics to give speeches in the same period. The purpose is to enable students to be able to speak freely, confidently and bravely; to be good at thinking, debating, and doing research.

E-talk的舞台是开放的，我们欢迎每一位VBS未来少年来到这里，站在聚光灯下，向世界展示自己的独特魅力；我们鼓励孩子们挑战自我，突破困境；我们相信，每一个孩子都有无限的潜力，只要他们有勇气站上舞台，就有可能成为真正的演讲者。

The stage of E-talk is open. We welcome every future teenager of VBS to come here, stand in the spotlight, and show their unique charm to the world; we encourage children to challenge themselves and break through difficulties; we believe that every child has unlimited potential. As long as they have the courage to stand on the stage, they may become real speakers.

让我们一起期待，在E-talk的舞台上，VBS未来少年们将如何用他们的声音，引领我们走进他们的世界，感受他们的热情与活力。

Let us look forward to how the future teenagers of VBS will use their voices to lead us into their world and feel their enthusiasm and vitality on the E-talk stage.

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